Just finished your demo game, loved the concept and with a bit of improvement would make it an incredible game. I pointed out all the things that could improve in the below video, but the key thing is the slow movement and camera locking when looking down.
thanks so much for taking the time to write this all out. Most of your concerns have been addressed already in my current build which is cool. This kind of feedback is very helpful!
I tested the Demo and I couldn't get over the beginning, I didn't have much to do, I just found a letter under a cloth and nothing else, but otherwise, it's very good.
Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid (the 3d game there):
Advantages:
1. The concept is amazing! I like the sense of dread and powerlessness that the game has offered.
2. The mystery is sooo well made. You just want to know more, especially after the ending and the stuff on the computer! Very catchy - serves the purpose of the demo!
3. The visuals are top hole! The place is so detailed. I like that is easy to miss stuff so you must pay attention to every thing around you! Also, I amires the chain mechanic a lot)
Disadvantages (points for further development):
1. When everything went black and the yellow line appeared on the floor - it was unclear what to do. The line seemed to me as an arrow, so I figured I need to go in the direction the arrow is pointing. I think it would be better is the line was flat at the end, so people could nor read it wrong.
2. Maybe I was stupid but there was no hint to where to dig and I also had to brute force the box open. Maybe I missed something, but it would be nice if the game had hints for stupid people like me (for instance, the hints may appear after you once have failed to find what you were supposed to and died)
3. The walls are painted with the same pattern. The pattern is made like painted with crayons or something so it's strange that someone painted the EXACT same thing over and over. Moreover, it doesn't look like a scribbles from a crazy person. I think the pattern should repeat less frequent or should be less readable depending on it's purpose in the game.
Overall:
The game is awesome! You, developers, are awesome! Thank you, Brian, for calling me a big brain in the game XD 5/5 Can't wait for the full version!
I'm hard on indie horror since so much of it is badly executed but I see potential here and I'm glad you got your funding! The only major issue I had was clicking on items. It was inconsistent and sometimes didn't seem to register, but I know it takes time to polish things. Also, I played a second time and the buried fire box didn't appear. Regardless, great job on what you've got so far and good luck with the finished product!
Easily one of the most promising horror games I've played. (I've played...a LOT) I don't think I've ever backed a game on Kickstarter so fast...actually I don't think I've ever backed one before! This game is creative and delightfully sinister! Absolutely cannot wait for it!
Trapped. 4 Hours to escape! Well, that seems like plenty of time. Find the tools - figure out the codes - hack the computer... can YOU DO IT without being caught?? Experience a taste of Darkstone Digital's creative game play mechanics when you least expect them. There's a lot of potential here and I'm excited for future development!
Thanks for the demo. I'm intrigued. Looking forward to playing the full game. I wasn't expecting the horror element as I went in completely blind. Very weird. :)
Yo Brian! Thanks so much for reaching out to me to play another one of your games. I definitely had support you on kickstarter, can't wait for the game!
Ugh the demo went by so quick, and I was loving all the diff possibilities you could explore! From the crawl space, the computer, the 'secret', or even what was going on upstairs. So much! I mentioned in the vid that if you needed anything more regarding voice acting, I'd def like to help out if you think I could fit. Also looking forward to the full release of Mortuary Assistant in the near future!
I currently don’t have a working mac here so I can’t easily test a build. Maybe once the game is complete, if I have the funds, I’ll grab a new mac and try it out.
I really loved the atmosphere and the plot twist at the end, but due to the lack of "move your mouse to rotate" while watching a dogs picture I was a little bit lost for a while. Still, I really loved it! Keep up the good work and here's my little playthrough (Polish language) Cheers!
I loved this game and what you had to show of it. The game was scary and cannot wait to see what you do next with the game. Would love to keep updated on the game progress :D
Originally noticed you as a dev of the Mortuary Assistant, which I thought was extremely well done and this demo really blew me away. I expected it to be quality (like MA) but this feels great to play and the puzzles were difficult but not too difficult. A very solid vertical slice, can't wait for the full game to see what the overall story is.
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Just finished your demo game, loved the concept and with a bit of improvement would make it an incredible game. I pointed out all the things that could improve in the below video, but the key thing is the slow movement and camera locking when looking down.
Hello there. I have finished your demo, and I loved it. I must admit I had some trouble, but I refused to give up.
I have seen a couple of your Youtube videos as well. They were very informative for a developer as myself.
Here’s my feedback and please take note that this is just my personal opinion.
Pros
Cons
I hope you will take some of my feedback into consideration. Perhaps you have already. You do have a great foundation for a good game.
I can’t wait to play the finished game. Keep it up.
Cheers
thanks so much for taking the time to write this all out. Most of your concerns have been addressed already in my current build which is cool. This kind of feedback is very helpful!
I tested the Demo and I couldn't get over the beginning, I didn't have much to do, I just found a letter under a cloth and nothing else, but otherwise, it's very good.
The letter gives you a hint of what to do
Es un excelente juego ojalá fuera mas largo.
Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid (the 3d game there):
Advantages:
1. The concept is amazing! I like the sense of dread and powerlessness that the game has offered.
2. The mystery is sooo well made. You just want to know more, especially after the ending and the stuff on the computer! Very catchy - serves the purpose of the demo!
3. The visuals are top hole! The place is so detailed. I like that is easy to miss stuff so you must pay attention to every thing around you! Also, I amires the chain mechanic a lot)
Disadvantages (points for further development):
1. When everything went black and the yellow line appeared on the floor - it was unclear what to do. The line seemed to me as an arrow, so I figured I need to go in the direction the arrow is pointing. I think it would be better is the line was flat at the end, so people could nor read it wrong.
2. Maybe I was stupid but there was no hint to where to dig and I also had to brute force the box open. Maybe I missed something, but it would be nice if the game had hints for stupid people like me (for instance, the hints may appear after you once have failed to find what you were supposed to and died)
3. The walls are painted with the same pattern. The pattern is made like painted with crayons or something so it's strange that someone painted the EXACT same thing over and over. Moreover, it doesn't look like a scribbles from a crazy person. I think the pattern should repeat less frequent or should be less readable depending on it's purpose in the game.
Overall:
The game is awesome! You, developers, are awesome! Thank you, Brian, for calling me a big brain in the game XD 5/5 Can't wait for the full version!
Hope my feedback was useful!
Did you do all the art and coding by yourself?, it's really good
I did! I do everything myself. And thank you! :D
I'm hard on indie horror since so much of it is badly executed but I see potential here and I'm glad you got your funding! The only major issue I had was clicking on items. It was inconsistent and sometimes didn't seem to register, but I know it takes time to polish things. Also, I played a second time and the buried fire box didn't appear. Regardless, great job on what you've got so far and good luck with the finished product!
Easily one of the most promising horror games I've played. (I've played...a LOT) I don't think I've ever backed a game on Kickstarter so fast...actually I don't think I've ever backed one before! This game is creative and delightfully sinister! Absolutely cannot wait for it!
Thank you so very much! This means a ton. :D
Loved it. Shit myself. 10/10
Wonderful!
This is such a good start to the game! Can't wait for the full game!
Thank you so much!
Trapped. 4 Hours to escape! Well, that seems like plenty of time. Find the tools - figure out the codes - hack the computer... can YOU DO IT without being caught?? Experience a taste of Darkstone Digital's creative game play mechanics when you least expect them. There's a lot of potential here and I'm excited for future development!
Thanks for the demo. I'm intrigued. Looking forward to playing the full game. I wasn't expecting the horror element as I went in completely blind. Very weird. :)
I see lots of potential!
Really Cool and Really Scary!!
The game is coming together very well Brian, it even scared me at the end of the demo.
Nice game man!
Can't wait for the full release! https://youtu.be/AsJGn3FBicc
Same! :D
Clever of you to put the key in a place that would require me to not look at the puppies.
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Yo Brian! Thanks so much for reaching out to me to play another one of your games. I definitely had support you on kickstarter, can't wait for the game!
I also managed to unlock the computer 😎
Thank you so much! I’m glad you had a good time and not many have unlocked the computer. Well done!
Hey Brian I heard your looking for support for the game I am welcome to help and make a O.S.T for the game.
Toby, feel free to send me some sample stuff brian@darkstonedigital.com
Well I'm hyped to be apart of the lucky few that unlocked it!😁
hi Brian i liked the demo :
-great voice acting
-nice graphics (tho i dont give a single melon about graphics)
-we actually have a story
Thank you! I have some pretty cool stuff I’m working on for the story. I hope folks like it.
im sure it will be an amazing overall project
First congrats for achieving the kick starter!
I will try it for sure it looks interesting.
Thank you bunches!
Ugh the demo went by so quick, and I was loving all the diff possibilities you could explore! From the crawl space, the computer, the 'secret', or even what was going on upstairs. So much! I mentioned in the vid that if you needed anything more regarding voice acting, I'd def like to help out if you think I could fit. Also looking forward to the full release of Mortuary Assistant in the near future!
Great work!
Awesome! Thank you so much for playing! I’m excited to work on MA too. One thing at a time.
Quite an interesting concept of the game! I will wait for the full version, I will pass it with pleasure! Thank you to the developer!
Thanks for playing!
Biggest of brains! Great job and thanks for playing!
Really enjoyed this game, love the elements of horror and the unexpected combined together. Cannot wait to see what's in store for the full game.
Feel free to check out my video of the game
Great game!! I can't wait for the full release!!
Thank you for playing!
The game looks amazing! I love the focus on exploration and piecing everything together!
Out of curiosity, do you have any plans to release it on Mac?
I currently don’t have a working mac here so I can’t easily test a build. Maybe once the game is complete, if I have the funds, I’ll grab a new mac and try it out.
i NEED TO KNOW THE STORY
You will!
Gave it a go...
Ayyyyy Step! Thanks for playing!
Not a problem my guy!
The game was amazing, i really enjoyed it, continue the good work!
super dope game, I really enjoyed it. keep it up guys
Thank you!
I really loved the atmosphere and the plot twist at the end, but due to the lack of "move your mouse to rotate" while watching a dogs picture I was a little bit lost for a while. Still, I really loved it! Keep up the good work and here's my little playthrough (Polish language) Cheers!
Thank you for playing!
I loved this game and what you had to show of it. The game was scary and cannot wait to see what you do next with the game. Would love to keep updated on the game progress :D
I’m glad you had a good time! You can stay up to date on my Twitter pretty easily. Thanks again for playing!
Ohh lovely, will give you a follow on twitter. To keep up to date. Anytime looking forward to playing more
Thanks for playing! Looking to have it done in about 3 months or so!
heck yeah l hope so lol
a little late to the party but I played it and this was great!!! This game surprised me very much I’m excited, Everyone stay safe and healthy!!!
Please add subtitles!
A subtitle system will be in the full version. :)
Cool
Thank you so much! I’m Having a lot of fun making this one.
LOOOOOVED IT! I can not wait for the full game! :D Great work!
Thank you so much for playing!
Loved the demo. Can't wait for the full game. Great work as always. :)
Thank you!